16 Feb 2015 4 Comments
by katsyarina in My Poetry Tags: haiku, life, poetry, rain, water, writing201
Raindrops like daggers
Stinging kisses on my skin
Wicked lullaby…
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jdoublep Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:29:17
YEAH! Perfect simile this.
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katsyarina Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:33:10
thank you 🙂
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evening scribbles Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:55:02
Great last line, can really feel the pain.
katsyarina Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:59:50
Thanks 🙂 Last line is always the most tricky & hard to write ^_^
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LifeRaduga 
Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:29:17
YEAH! Perfect simile this.
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Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:33:10
thank you 🙂
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Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:55:02
Great last line, can really feel the pain.
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Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:59:50
Thanks 🙂 Last line is always the most tricky & hard to write ^_^
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