Water haiku

Raindrops like daggers

Stinging kisses on my skin

Wicked lullaby…

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4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. jdoublep
    Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:29:17

    YEAH! Perfect simile this.

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  2. evening scribbles
    Feb 16, 2015 @ 23:55:02

    Great last line, can really feel the pain.

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